Evaluation(only one person)

Actually, I could not evaluate Jan Michael becuase he doesn't put his draft and he didn't finished it. So, I chose other classmate,Erlisa Koci who I chose myself.

1. Her thesis: what exactly is global warming? A common definition is the dramatically increasing amount of carbon dioxide which is harming the environment. Sure, this is true, but exactly how is this happening?(global warming)

2.For example, carrots are healthy, but if you eat too much of it you’ll eventually become orange. Yeah laugh, but it’s true. The same applies to carbon dioxide. Since the industrial revolution began in the 1850’s, human processes have caused emissions of this. (first of paragraph in her essay). This is good example because her example is very easy to understand her main point.

3. In fact, I could not find of any parts what was boring because she explained how and why global warming was happening and why ice began to melt. It was interesting because my topic was also about global warming. I got useful information from her.

4.she indicated Al gore's An inconvenient truth documentaryas her resource. but she has not another resource about what she mentioned.

5.No. she didn't have a fictional stroy.

6. In fact, I don't know because my grammer skills is not also good. How can I evaluate other's grammer skills even if I cannot check my grammer myself? however, in my opinion, her grammer is good because I don't feel disturbed because of grammer while I read her papers.

Free Topic.

I'm very happy that I can write whatever I want. Until now, I still feel uncomfortable to use blogs because I have to use computers. Until now, this class focuses on environment. I am learning about environment during I take this class. Frankly speaking, I don't care about environment after I take this class because I have many things what I should care. I have to care my grade, my future, and my ambition for my goal. Actually, I think that other people think like me. Most people recognize a problem of environment, however they cannot do any activities for environment because they need to worry themselves before they think other things.

Do not blame me. It is true. True is sometimes uncomfortable to us. I like Al gore's title of the book, inconvenience truth. Do not pretend to environmentalist. Even if you do not care environment, scientists and politicians care instead of you. Nothing can be changed even if you care environment. This is my thinking, but I'm not mention until now because this blogs assignments is not asking for my personal opinion about environment.

Then, you might say that even if it is true, I can do small things. Yes. I can do small things for environment. However, classmates, tell me frankly. How many time do you spend for caring environment? How many people do recycle everyday? You should care midterm examination or any other assignments for other classes. Do you think you can spend your time for caring environment so much more than your exams? Maybe answer is no. You will say yes. I guess so.
What I should care is my own problems. Global warming is serious problems, but it will be not happening tomorrow. We should our own problem. If we cannot care our own problems, we can not care other problems too. I want to give advice for you. You should care your problem.
After you solve your own problems, you can solve other problem. I'm very selfish, but I'm also pratical and real person. You cannot tell that my thinking is li

you can ignore what I say. You might think my speech is sound of a dog. I don't care. You ignore. I will say.

Earth day and global warming in Netherlands

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y1XTcFokKOk&feature=email


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81O3mZ7rxJE( thinking of children in Netherlands about global warming)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_m-5omVdEJM (commercial about global warming in Netherlands)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ESJoTTFAz-Y (Netherlands flooding 3D/Holanda Inundada)

My research paper.

My topic is global warming in Netherlands. I will discuss about how global warming can be affected in Netherlands and what is the result of global warming. As I investigate relationship between Netherlands and global warming, I find that flooding is major problems in Netherlands.
Thus, I will analyze a factor of flooding in Netherlands.



In fact, global warming is major problem and many people care about it in the world. We already know the fact, but I want to show one specific country. When I just say global warming, it seems to vague. Then, We cannot feel how much global warming is serious directly.
However, If one country is mentioned, we can feel that how much global warming is serious directly. Moreover, my research papers will be helpful to provide information for people who don't recognize or don't care about environment about global warming, such as cause or effect of global warming.
By doing so, I hope that the people begin to know about global warming in Netherlands and I also want that they look for a solution themselves for Netherlands and our neighborhood.

Until now, I just have some articles from websites. I have various articles about global warming in Netherlands. Moreover, I gather some charts and graphs, so it can be helpful to understand how much global warming affects to Netherlands. I don't check books or magazines, however I will add some materials from books.

I want to show how much global warming affect to Netherlands and why global warming is happened. I also want to demonstrate a solution what politicians and scientists in Netherlands are researching. It will be my thesis.